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2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Knowing that you intend to learn erhu, I’m writing to recommend Mr. Wang to you.
Mr. Wang, with rich experience in teaching Erhu, knows well how to simplify his teaching process, which enables you to understand his lesson more easily. Widely acknowledged as a humorous teacher, he can create a relaxing atmosphere for you. Plus, His fluency in oral English will definitely makes it easier for you to communicate.
I assure you Mr. Wang is your good choice. Wish you a pleasant learning journey.
Knowing that you intend to learn erhu, I'm more than delighted to recommend Mr. Wang to you.
Mr. Wang has been teaching music in my school since he graduated from Central Conservatory of Music. As an experienced and patient teach er, he is popular with his students, many of whom have been awarded top prizes in the City Er hu Competition. More importantly, he has a good command of English, making it easy for you to communicate.
I hope you'll find his guidance rewarding.
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Learning that you are looking for a Chinese teacher for you son, I’m writing to recommend you a suitable candidate, my friend Wang Ming.
Discipline and diligence make him one of the top students in my class. Plus, his Chinese is proficient, enabling him to rank first in the Chinese Speech Contest. What’s more, Wang Ming, widely recognized as a humorous, patient and responsible person, can definitely create a relaxing atmosphere for your son. In short, I am convinced that he is an ideal candidate.
I assure you Wang Ming is your good choice.
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