阅卷后，同事们总结的作文问题有：
1. 漏要点：个别学生没有交代写信背景或目的。
2. 用词不准确：专业用course，majority,subject。关心用careness，concerning。
3. 有些直接写成求助信，表示自己不知道哪个专业好，寻求建议。
4. 直接“盼复信”结尾，无过度，不自然。
5. 应该写所选专业，写成了职业，比如该写teaching/education,结果写的是teacher/doctor。
6.理由不走心，写一些I am good at...; broaden my horizons这种
7. 多写了一个备选专业。
作文指导：
专业选择的表达
choose a major
choose sth as my major
choose to study+专业名
my choice of major
专业名 is my choice.
major in+专业
选择理由的方向：
interest/love/passion/ enthusiasm
dream/goal
ability/capability/competence
career prospect
employability
high salary/potential earnings
帮助打开学生选择专业理由的格局。
满分范文一篇，128字
Dear Steve,
How is everything going? I’m delighted to receive your email and thank you for your concern about my choice of major. I’d like to choose Artificial Intelligence (AI) in college.
Firstly, science has always been my passion, from which I have gained pure joy. I take pleasure in discovering the constant natural laws behind the ever-changing world and think in a rational and logical way. Besides, Since we live in an intellectualized world, countries wanting to prosper in the future largely depend on the rapid development of AI. Under such circumstances, there’s no doubt that job opportunities related to AI will be abundant.
What about you? I am so curious about your plan on major. May both of us achieve our dreams! I’m looking forward to your reply.
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