- 写作思路 -
第一段:描述图表
第二段:说明图表数据增长or下降的原因。
第三段:表达自己对此现象的看法以及面对此现象我们该怎么去做。
我之前写过一篇21年六级真题图表作文解析,其中比较详细地介绍了图表作文的写作思路:英语写作Ⅰ六级图表作文范文分析。
(具体写不写第二段和第三段要看作文要求,如果作文direction里写明了你要“interpret the chart and give your comments”,那就一定别忘了写第二段和第三段,如果只是让“interpret the chart”,那在作文结尾写一两句第二段和第三段的内容或者不写即可)
嵌套饼状图的写作思路(具体文章分析在:作文练习Ⅰ图表作文:17年大英赛C类真题)
第一部分思路:从饼状图中我们可以了解到xx是怎样的,其中百分之几是A,百分之几是B,B中a占多少,b占多少,c占多少。
第二部分思路:图表数据说明了什么,我的看法是什么。
(一般图表给的数据多比较复杂,作文就描述图表数据的篇幅多一些,比如作文练习Ⅰ图表作文:18年大英赛C类真题。如果图表给的数据很简单,比如21年12月的六级作文真题,就给了个单条折线图,那描述图表数据的篇幅可以小一些,重点放在分析图表数据变化的原因上,当然最重要的还是依照作文的direction来,即看作文题目到底让写什么,到底让怎么写,审题是最重要的)
- 第一段常用表达 -
上升 (v):
increase; go up; rise; improve; grow; jump; rocket; soar; surge; shoot up(猛增); climb; ascend; leap; skyroket; proliferate
上升 (n):
increase; rise; growth; jump; surge; upturn; leap
fall; drop; decrease; decline; go down; sink; dip;plummet; descend; diminish; dwindle; shrink; slupm; plunge; dive; nosedive
decrease, decline, fall, reduction, drop, slowdown, slump, plunge, dive, nosedive
range / vary from xx to xx,go up and down, ups and downs
remain, keep, stay, maintain, stabilize, stagnate
stable, steady, constant, unchanged
stagnation; stability; steadiness; plateau
hove at; remain the same trend; remain stable; remain constant; reach a plateau at; stabilize at
A and B share the same trend; the trend of A happens to coincide with B
副词:significantly;considerably;rapidly;sharply;dramatically;drastically;enormously;substantially;markedly;steeply; greatly; massively; hugely; precipitously
形容词:striking/ skyrocketing/ twofold(两倍的)/ threefold(三倍的)/ considerable/ steep
词组:at an alarming rate, by/in leaps and bounds, by a wide/significant margin
副词:slightly;gradually;slowly;steadily;moderately; marginally; modestly
形容词:steady/moderate/slow/slight/gradual
词组:in a moderate way, by a narrow margin
(hit/register/arrive at/stand at/increase to都可以替换掉reach)
(top/summit/zenith/highest point都可以替换掉peak)
(drop/hit/register/arrive at/stand at/decrease to都可以替换掉reach)
(trough/lowest point都可以替换掉bottom)
eg:reach the bottom of xx
occupy the largest proportion of xx
occupy=make up=take up=account for
proportion=number=percentage
occupy the smallest proportion of xx
occupy=make up=take up=account for
proportion=number=percentage
comprise, consist of, be made up of,be composed of
constitute, make up,form, occupy, account for, represent
4. "大约"/"超过"/"不足"和预测类的表达方式
about/around/approximately/roughly/nearly/almost/just + 数字
over/just under/close to/in the region of + 数字
数字 + or so/or thereabouts
expect, predict, project, forecast
xx is expected/predicted/projected/forecasted to reach …
display/represent/demonstrate/show/convey/illustrate/indicate/describe/embody/reflect/reveal/outline/delineate/depict/expound/elaborate
The mobile-phone subscriptions soared to 4 billion in 2008.
Conversely, the urban population saw a rising trend, growing from only 300 million to 680 million by 2010.
Domestic cars had a dramatic increase in the market share, as high as 9.8%, while/whereas(然而)Japanese cars declined by nearly 10%.
(by+数据,就是上升/下降了多少,例如declined by nearly 10%就是下降了将近10%,to+数据,是指上升/下降到多少)
The amount of underground water ranks the second ,the percentage being 30.2%.
We cannot fail to see that the biggest share is acquiring knowledge, with a proportion as high as 59.5%.
We cannot fail to see that the biggest share is acquiring knowledge, accounting for 59.5%.
Meanwhile, it is also not difficult to find that service, environment, price and other factors occupy 26.8%, 23.8%, 8.4% and 4.7% respectively(分别地).
The data show a comparison between the amount of Red wine that is consumed and the rates of US birth.
In comparison with A, B is …
A is three times as much as B …
The graph shows a threefold increase in number of …
The total number in 2012, which is 8,318, is about two times as much as the total number in 2008.
- 第二段常用表达 -
There are many reasons explaining this phenomenon.
Three major reasons give rise to the phenomenon mentioned above.
(主要原因)The main reason is that due to (the progress in economy / the improvement of living standards), a growing number of people ……
(第二个原因)What is more, there is no doubt in saying that , with (the pace of modern society speeding up / the advance of technology) , a majority of people (try their best to catch up with the times and improve themselves) by (pursuing further education).
(第三个原因)Thirdly , (under the background of modernization / with the rapid development of economy and society) , xx may have gradually become an unstoppable trend(趋势)in recent years.
with the progress in economy
with the improvement of living standards
with the pace of modern society speeding up
with the advance of technology
with the rapid development of economy and society
under the background of modernization / urbanization / industrialization
- 第三段常用表达 -
积极的:Considering all these, I believe that we should take a reasonable attitude toward xx. In conclusion, from my point of view, such a phenomenon is (positive) and (acceptable).
积极的:Taking into account what has been argued so far, it is not surprising to see the results in the above diagram. Thus, such phenomenon proves to be quite normal and acceptable. And I believe the trend will not change in the near future.
积极的:Definitely, the boom of (the mobile industry) tends to exert a beneficial influence on people’s lives, and hence, it should be, from every aspect, encouraged and further advocated.
消极的:In view of the description and analysis above, I’m convinced that actions have to be taken to cope with the problems arising from ……
趋势预测:From what has been discussed above, a trend can be predicted from the chart that ……
趋势预测:XX will be a growing trend in today's (busy) society.
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