众所周知，参考范文是个好东西，可能有些小可爱还背过范文。范文是好，但是咱们得从它那学到能用得上的表达，它才是真的好呀！
很多小可爱简单看过或背过范文，但范文里的亮点高分表达，都没有拆解下来用在作文里。可这些才是范文的精华所在呀！
今日四木就来跟大家分享一下，满分范文里那些堪称“教科书般”的高分靓眼表达，已拆解完毕！用上这些“范文表达”，高分拿得稳稳的！
话不多说，大家笔记本备好，快继续往下看吧！
感谢，建议，邀请，通知
1. Thank youin advance.
先行致谢。（2013.全国卷）
in advance (of ...) 提前(于...)，预先(于...)
2. Any student whois interested is welcome to participate.
欢迎任何感兴趣的同学来参加。（2016.全国卷）
将主动句变成被动句，再用从句将简单句变成高级句，妥妥的高分句呀！建议大家把这个句子记下来。
3. I would appreciate it if you could take my proposal into consideration.
如果您能考虑我的建议，我将不胜感激。（2015.上海）
结尾句型：I would appreciate it if... 如果...我将不胜感激
take sth. into consideration 考虑到某事，顾及某事，可以在作文中替换consider
4. We would appreciate it if you could reply at your earliest convenience.
如果您能尽早回复，我们将不胜感激。（ 2011.上海）
书信回复：reply at your earliest convenience 尽早、尽快回复
5. Glad to see you have made some progress in Chinese learning and I’m writing to tell you something about our next lesson.
很高兴看到你在汉语学习方面的进步，我写信时告诉你关于下次课的一些事情。（2017.全国Ⅰ卷）
have made some progress in...
在...方面取得了进步
6. I'm sure it can leave a wonderful impression on you!
我确定它能给你留下深刻印象。（2017.全国Ⅱ卷）
leave a wonderful impression on...
给...留下深刻印象
7. Occasionally learning that you are addicted to table tennis, I am writing to sincerely invite you to join the table tennis team in our school aimed at developing our interests and improving our skills.
偶然间了解到你对乒乓球很着迷，我写信是诚挚的邀请你参加我们学校的乒乓球队，这个球队旨在开发我们的兴趣和提升我们的技能。（2017.全国Ⅱ卷）
兴趣爱好类可以用上的表达：
be addicted to 对...入迷
develop our interests 培养/发展兴趣爱好
improving our skills 提升技能
8. If you are interested in what I have stated above, sign up on our school website before September 1st.
如果你对我以上陈述的感兴趣，请在九月一号前在我们学校的网站上报名吧。（2017.全国Ⅱ卷）
在介绍或推荐信的结尾，可在interested 后面再加上一个从句，让句型更高级还能凑字数。
sign up 报名
中国传统文化
1. This time I will introduce Tang Poetry to you, which is of great help in learning Chinese.
这次我要向你介绍唐诗，它对学习汉语有很大帮助。（2017.全国Ⅰ卷）
introduce sth./sb. to sb. 向某人介绍人/事
be of (great) help 有(很大)帮助的
这是个非限制性定语从句，善用从句很加分的！建议大家将整句话都记下来，换掉其中的词就可以继续用啦！
比如将“唐诗”换成剪纸展会、书法比赛等，后面的“学习汉语”换成学习或弘扬中国文化等。
2. In the class, you will mainly learn Tang poetry, which reflects traditional Chinese culture and is deeply loved by Chinese.
课堂上，你将主要学习唐诗，唐诗反映了中国传统文化、深受中国人喜爱。（2017.全国Ⅰ卷）
传统文化类可用表达：reflect traditional Chinese culture 反映中国传统文化
be deeply loved by 深受......喜爱
3. You’d better make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the history of Tang Dynasty, which makes it easy for you to go through the class.
上课之前，你最好准备充分并且对唐朝历史有一个简单的了解，这会使你上起课来更容易。（2017.全国Ⅰ卷）
make full preparations 做好充分准备
have a brief understanding of... 有一个简单的了解
4. Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture.
而且，将会有许多有用有趣的活动，从中你可以对中国文化有一个更清晰的认识。（2017.全国Ⅱ卷）
活动的好处/优点：
have a clearer picture of Chinese culture 对中国传统文化有一个清晰的认识
这个句子其实也算是传统文化类作文的万金油句子，建议大家整句记下来，下次就可以直接套用啦！
5. You can feel the beauty of Chinese by learning Tang Poetry.
通过学习唐诗，你能够感受到汉语之美。（2017.全国Ⅰ卷）
feel the beauty of... 感受...之美
句子后面的“汉语”可以直接换成中国文化，艺术等等。
学校生活与体育活动
1. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.
我希望能成为你们夏令营中的一员。（ 2012.全国）
accept sb. as 接纳某人成为...
2. Outdoor activities are really helpful in building up my body and enriching my school life.
户外活动确实对我增强体质和丰富学校生活有益。(2014.江西)
体育/户外活动的好处：
build up one's body 强身健体
enrich one's school life 丰富学校生活
3. As Teachers' Day was approaching, our class decided to hold a party to celebrate the important day.
教师节日益临近，我们班决定举行聚会来庆祝这个重要的节日。（2012.陕西）
在作文里提到节日临近有活动会举办，就可以用上：As ... was approaching, xxx.
4. On behalf of our school, I would like to express our warm welcome to you.
我代表我校，向您表示热烈的欢迎。（2014.陕西）
on behalf of 代表
express (warm) welcome to sb. 对某人表示（热烈）欢迎
这句话可以在用在一些活动前的演讲类作文，大家可以将这整句话记下来，下次不就能用上啦！
5. The activity got us close to nature and gave us relaxation from heavy school work.
这次活动让我们走近了大自然，使我们从繁重的课业中解脱出来。（2013.陕西）
get close to nature 亲近大自然
gave one's relaxation from heavy school work 从繁重的课业中解放出来
这个表达可以用在一些提到减压减负、课外活动、体育运动等作文里 ，表示活动的意义或好处
6. Besides building up my body and enriching my knowledge, after-class activities also free me from the heavy work of study.
除了强身健体和丰富知识之外，课后活动也让我从繁重的学业中解脱出来。（2011.四川）
enrich one's knowledge 丰富知识
free me from the heavy work of study 从繁重的学业中解脱出来
这个表达和上面的表达意思一致，大家可以记在一起，到作文里替换着用~
7. Word came that a reading festival would be held by our school.
有消息传来说我校将要举办一个阅读节。（2015.上海）
在与举办活动相关的作文里，可以用上这个去做开头呀：Word came that... xx would be held.指有消息说xx要被举办。
学习提升
1. As a student, there is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before my classmates.
作为一名学生，没有什么比在同学面前被老师表扬更好的了。（2015.湖南）
there is nothing better than 没有比……更好的了
2. I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.
我英语学得很好，因此被选为英语老师的助手。（2015.陕西）
have a good command of... 精通
such … that...如此以至于
be elected as... 被选为
3. Helen has set an excellent example for all of us.
海伦为我们大家树立了好榜样。（2008.湖南）
set an example for sb. 给某人树立榜样
4. Spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily.
要不遗余力地获取知识，决不轻易灰心。（2015.福建）
spare no effort to do sth. 不遗余力地做某事，可以在作文中替换try one's best
acquire knowledge 获取知识
5. I decided on science as my main subject of study. The reasons are as follows.
我决定主修理科，理由如下。（2012.安徽）
The reasons are as follows. 原因如下。
这个句子可以在列举原因之前先做总起。
日常活动与行为
1. I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places.
我认为我们大家都应该注意在公共场所的行为举止。（2012.福建）
mind one's behavior 注意行为举止
2. If it's convenient for you, let's meet at 8:30 outside the school gate.
如果你方便的话，我们8点半在学校门口碰面吧。（2016.全国）
It is convenient (for sb.) to do sth. (某人) 方便做某事
3. Let me know what time suits you best.
告诉我什么时间你最方便。（2016.全国）
suit you best 对你来说最合适
4. I wonder if it is convenient for you to join me in visiting the exhibition.
我想知道你是否方便和我一起去参观展览。（2017.全国）
I wonder if /whether 我不知道是否……
join sb. in doing sth. 和某人一起做某事
人际关系
1. I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea.（2015.浙江）
我设法说服了我的同学接受我的想法。
manage to do sth. 设法做某事
persuade sb. into doing sth. 说服某人做某事
2. Everyone in our society should help those in need.
我们社会上的每个人都应该帮助那些需要帮助的人。（2016.江苏）
help people in need 帮助需要帮助的人
3. It is greatly important to try to keep a good relationship with other classmates.
努力和其他同学保持良好关系非常重要。（2013.广东）
keep a good relationship with 与……保持良好关系
以上就是今天的全部分享啦~
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