四六级作文要求字数差不多，120~150字；150字是一个什么样的概念？撑破天十一二个长句子就结束了，一来方便，二来可以博得阅卷老师眼球，岂不双收？
可是我等菜鸟只会写 "It's better to......;It's important to......;In my opinion.....;There is......As an old saying......"不举例子了，我也说不上来平常考试我写了多少个"I think...";
只会写这些短句子或者比这些好一点怎么办呢？其实很简单，耍一些花招，把短句变成长句，骗过阅卷老师的眼睛，让他尽可能给你好的分数 因为：
四六级阅卷老师只有不到30s的时间看你的试卷就要给你一个分数。如果你文中出现垃圾词，你的能力就会被估算出来，那么这篇文章就会被大打折扣，给你一个毫不留情的分数以保证其与你在前面所做题得到的分数是成正比的（就算你前面做的很好也没有用，老师看不到前面的成绩，只能以你作文的水平做个估算），这样阅卷老师的评分水平就不会超过机器限定的某一个范围以保证他来年可以继续参加阅卷
短句变长句的三原则：
要先想好要写的短句，然后对这个短句进行以下加工
三原则之间可以相互叠加使用
- 原则一：背景原则：
来个例句：Along with the remarkable / tremendous advancement of the science and technology in the contemporary society.随着科学技术在当代社会的飞速发展
背景就是：Along with the remarkable / tremendous advancement of.......随着....巨大的进步，....怎么样。
把这句话套在这里：Along with the remarkable advancement of China's economy，the price of housing is higher and higher.
当然可能有更好的套用方法，顺便再添油加醋：Along with the remarkable advancement in the science of vaccination，scientists have yielded a much-improved quality of life and health among the world, by eradicating and helping in fighting many infectious diseases.
相信你一定会在考试的时候想方设法套用这句话的，无论什么题目，总能把这个帽子加进去。
- 原则二：帽子原则：
例句：Nobody could fail to notice the fact that an increasing number of Chinese are fond of celebrating some Western festivals today.没有人可以否认这样的事实那就是:越来越多的中国人喜欢庆祝一些西方节日。
帽子就是：Nobody could fail to notice the fact that.....没有人可以否认这样的事实那就是......
上面这句话与以下短语等价：
There is no denying that......
It is widely accepted that......
It is universally acknowledged that.....
It can't be denied that.......
这就意味着随时换着句子用而不被发现，就算发现了也没什么的，因为水平确实不在高中了。
对了，再介绍一个很管用的帽子：
帽子二：As is verified in a recent survey conducted by the China Daily / the Economist / the Chinese Academy of Science....正如《中国日报》/《经济学人》/ 中科院 所做的趣味调查一样......
至于后面该加些什么就看情况而定了，只要你想加就一定能加的。
假设我们作文题目是关于旅游的，我们就可以这样写：
As is verified in a recent survey conducted by the China Daily,people in expanding numbers are getting interested in traveling.正如《中国日报》所做的趣味调查一样，越来越多的人对旅游感兴趣。
- 原则三：插足原则：
顾名思义，这里主要讲的就是往句子里插入单词，句子，短语。
首先介绍几个万能的插足词：
我认为：for my part , from my own perspective..
程度状语：undoubtedly(毫无疑问),definitely（清楚地）
ps：插足条件：主谓之间
同样给个例句：
- Writing,undoubtedly,makes an exact man.写作，毫无疑问，让人变得严谨。
Nobody could fail to notice the fact that the Internet , from my own perspective,is becoming increasingly popular.在我看来，没有人可以否认那就是互联网正变得越来越受欢迎。（这句话把原则二和三用在一起了）
最后加一个三原则一起使用的例子：
Along with the tremendous advancement of the science and technology in contemporary city,nobody could fail to notice the fact that writing,undoubtedly,makes an exact man. 随着科技在当代城市的飞速发展，毫无疑问，没有人可以否认一个事实那就是写作使人严谨。
当你把几个想法先用短句描述一遍，在加上帽子，背景什么的，要能合在一起最好了，不能也没关系；而且这些方法可以反复用而不出现重复，但很可惜背景法则只能用一次。
--------------三原则到这里就介绍完了，接下来该说说“垃圾词“怎么处理了--------------
什么是垃圾词？这个要看我们自身的水平，对于我来说，写作文时第一想到的词全部都是垃圾词！都要换！
这里只举一些我常用到的垃圾词和处理方法了(处理方法就是换掉他)：
垃圾词：替换词（不同词语之间我都用分号隔开了，这样更容易看清楚一些）
- think :assume；Hold the idea that+句子; maintain; conceive;as far as I am concerned ; from my point of view
- people:individuals; characters; folks
- some/many : a slice of; an ocean of ; a multitude of; a host of; a variety of; a diversity of; various; diverse
- very:decidedly; intensely; overwhelmingly; exceedingly
- important:play a critical role in day-to-day life; fundamental and elementary; of great importance; significant--significance; indispensable,and crucial
- advantage: benefits; dominance; superiority; merit
- disadvantage: shortcoming; deficiency; handicap; flaw
- in my opinion:for my part; in my personal sense; from my point of view; as far as I am concerned; from my own perspective
- for example:taking a look around,we can find examples too numerous to list: (这里注意随便举一个例子就好，不要举的太多，看句子意思就明白了)
- more and more people:people in expanding numbers
- be interested in: sth appeals to sb ; sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb
- 带来坏的影响：exert a negative and unfavorable impact on......
- 带来好的影响：exert a favorable and positive impact on........
经典开头句
1.Recently, the problem of … has aroused people’s concern.
最近,…问题已引起人们的关注.
2.(Internet) has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
(互联网)已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色.它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题.
3.Nowadays, (overpopulation) has become a problem we have to face.
如今,(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了.
4.It is commonly believed that… / It is a common belief that…
人们一般认为…
5.Many people insist that…
很多人坚持认为…
6.With the development of ( science and technology ), more and more people believe that…
随着(科技)的发展,越来越多的人认为…
7.A lot of people seem to think that…
很多人似乎认为…
经典结尾句
1.Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that…
把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论…
2.Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that…
考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论…
3.Hence/Therefore, we’d better come to the conclusion that…
因此,我们最好得出这样的结论…
4.There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.
毫无疑问,(跳槽)有优点也有缺点.
5.All in all, we cannot live without… But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.
总之,我们没有…是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.
一、开始段落
1. Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that....
随着社会的不断发展，出现了越来越多的问题，其中之一便是____________。
2. As to whether it is a blessing or a curse, however, people take different attitudes.
然而，对于此类问题，人们持不同的看法。
(Hold different attitudes 持不同的看；Come up with different attitudes 有不同的看法)
3. As society develops, people are attaching much importance to....
随着社会的发展，人们开始关注............
4. In the process of modern urban development, we often find ourselves in a dilemma.
在都市的发展中，我们往往会陷入困境。
5. Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern, some people are in alarm that....
最近，这种现象引起了人们的广泛关注，有人开始担心______________。
6. Now we are entering a new era, full of opportunities and challenges.
现在我们正在进入一个充满机会和挑战的新时代。
7. plays such an important role that it undeniably becomes the biggest concern of the present world, there comes a question, is it a blessing or a curse?'
_______显得非常重要而成为当今世界所关注的最大的问题，这是无可厚非的。不过，问题是：'我们该如何抉择?'
8. The human race has entered a completely new stage in its history, with the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization, more problems are brought to our attention.
人类进入了一个历史的崭新的阶段，经济全球化、都市化的速度不断加快，随之给我们带来了很多问题。
二、中间段落句
1.The causes of ______ are varied. They include______ , perhaps the main cause is ______. 造成______的原因有很多，包括______,主要原因可能是______。
2.In the first place, ______. In the second place______ .首先，______。其次，______。
3.For one thing, ______. For another, ______.一方面,______。另一方面，______。
4.Many students like ______. Among them there are two different attitudes to ______. Some of them think that . Others, however, dont think so. They feel that ______. 许多学生喜欢______。关于他们有两种不同的观点。有人认为______。而另外一些则不赞同这种看法。他们认为______。
5. From my everyday experience and observation I can list several examples that defend the statement that ______.根据我的日常经验和观察，我可以举出几个例子来证明______。
三、结尾段落
1. 至于我，在某种程度上我同意后面的观点，我认为……
As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that ____.
2. 总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样，我们才能在将来……。
In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______.Only in this way can ______in the future.
3. 但是，……和……都有它们各自的优势(好处)。例如，……，而……。然而，把这两者相比较，我更倾向于(喜欢)……
But ______and ______have their own advantages. For example, _____, while_____. Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to______.
4. 就我个人而言，我相信……，因此，我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为……
Personally, I believe that_____. Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because______.
5. 随着社会的发展，……。因此，迫切需要……。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自已的一份力量，这个社会将要变得越来越好。
With the development of society, ______.So it's urgent and necessary to ____.If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.
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