小学英语短作文:我最喜欢的动物英语作文+朗读mp3

一. 写作要点提示>

1. 可以描写小动物的外貌、习性等。

示例:My favourite animal is a dog. My dog is white.

译文:我最喜欢的动物是小狗。我的小狗是白色的。

2. 可以写自己和小动物之间发生的事情。

示例:One day,my dog went missing.

译文:有一天,我的小狗找不到了。

二. 写作思路提示>

开头
My favourite animal is a rabbit. I have a rabbit.
我最喜欢的动物是小免子。我有一只小兔子。
 中间
My rabbit is white. It can jump and run. It likes to eat carrots.
我的小兔子是白色的。它会跳会跑。它喜欢吃胡萝卜。
 结尾
I like it very much. 
我非常喜欢它。
三.写作步骤详解>

1. 如何写好开头

①可以直接点题,说出自己喜欢的动物。

示例:My favourite animal is a monkey.

译文:我最喜欢的动物是猴子。

②可以以特殊疑问句开头。

示例:What is your favourite animal? My favourite animal is a monkey.

译文:你最喜欢什么动物?我最喜欢猴子。

2. 如何写好中间

①开篇点题后,可以描述小动物的外貌特征,生活习性。

示例:The monkey is brown. It likes to eat bananas and peaches.

译文:猴子是棕色的。它喜欢吃香蕉和桃子。

②可以说一说自己喜欢的原因。

示例:I like monkeys because monkeys are cute and smart.

译文:我喜欢猴子,因为猴子聪明可爱。

3. 如何写好结尾

①最后可以呼应前文。

示例:I like monkeys very much.

译文:我非常喜欢猴子。

②可以问问别人喜欢不喜欢。

示例:Do you like monkeys?

译文:你喜欢猴子吗?

经典范文

经典范文(一)

Lovely pandas
What's your favourite animal? Panda is my favourite animal. Pandas look like bears,but they are not. They live in China. They have a small tail and a fat body. They are black and white. They look clumsy,but they can climb trees. They like to eat bamboo very much. Look! The baby panda is in its mother's arms,they are sleeping. They are very lovely. Pandas are my favourite animals.

译文:

可爱的熊猫
你最喜欢的动物是什么?我最喜欢的动物是熊猫。熊猫长的像熊,但是又不是熊。它们生活在中国。它们有一条短尾巴和胖胖的身体。它们的毛是黑白色的。它们看上去笨笨的,但是会爬树。它们喜欢吃竹子。看,那个小熊猫宝宝正在妈妈怀里,它们在睡觉呢。它们真可爱。熊猫是我最喜欢的动物。
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点评:

本文以特殊疑问句作为文章开头,引出了自己最喜欢的动物。接着描述了熊猫的外貌特征以及生活习性。最后,对文章开头进行呼应。

经典范文(二)

A pet mouse 

Do you know what my favourite animal is? Guess! Yes,it's a mouse. I have a little mouse. She is a white mouse. She has lovely eyes and two short legs. I buy some food for her everyday. She likes eating meat,but she eats a little. I also give her water. I give her a small ball. She plays it happily.

译文

一只宠物老鼠

你知道我最喜欢的动物是什么吗?猜猜看!是的,是老鼠。我有一只小老鼠。她是一只白色的老鼠。她长着可爱的眼睛、两条小短腿。我每天给她买食物吃。她喜欢吃肉,但是只吃一点。我也给她水喝。我给她一个球,她玩得很开心
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点评:

本文以问句开头,吸引了读者的阅读兴趣,接着直接点明自己最喜爱的动物是老鼠,很是出人意料。作者描写了宠物老鼠的外貌、饮食以及自己和它之间的故事,充满了童趣。

                                         经典范文(三)

My little dog

Dogs are my favourite animal. I have a dog. His name is Beibei,and I like Beibei very much. He is only one year old and he is very small. He is black and white. He has four legs and a small face. He has a small mouth,too. He loves meat very much. He is cute and smart. I like him very much. 

译文:

我的小狗

狗是我最喜欢的动物。我有一只小狗,它的名字叫贝贝。我非常喜欢贝贝。它现在只有一岁,长的很小。它长着黑白相间的毛,有四条腿,小小的脸,还有小小的嘴。它非常喜欢吃肉。
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点评:

文章开头说明,狗是作者最喜欢的动物,继而介绍了自己有一只小狗。之后,文章对这只小狗进行了外貌和特点的描写,是本文的重点部分。后,再次点题,说明自己很喜欢自己的小狗。

                                        经典范文(四)

Cute chicks

My grandma has a hen. The hen has eight little chicks. They stay in a box. They are yellow and soft. They are so cute. The mother hen loves her eight babies. I go to see them in the morning,in the afternoon and in the evening. I like these little chicks. I hope they can grow up earlier. They're my favourite animals.

译文:

可爱的小鸡

我的奶奶有一只母鸡。母鸡生了八只小鸡。它们待在一个箱子里。它们黄黄的、软软的,非常可爱。母鸡妈妈非常爱她的八个小孩子。早晨、下午和晚上我都去看望它们。我喜欢这些小鸡。我希望它们快快长大。它们是我最喜欢的动物。

点评:

本文构思十分巧妙,在先由奶奶家的母鸡引出八只小鸡,最后点题即小鸡是作者最喜欢的动物。本文语言,如"They are yellow and soft. “I see them in the morning,in the afternoon and in the evening. ”充满天真和童趣。