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I’m LiHua.I’m writing to tell you a piece of urgent information.
Last Sunday, I picked up a passport in the subway station.The owner of it is Steven who comes from England. I don’t know how to return it to him. So I need your help. I wish you could post a notice on your newspaper to tell him about the missing passport.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
I’m LiHua, (a high school student in our city(增加同位语，其解释说明的作用)). I’m writing to tell you a piece of urgent information.
I picked up a passport last Sunday in the subway station (when I was taking a ride home. There was nobody around when I found it on a waiting bench. 补充具体细节信息)The owner of it is Steven who comes from England.(Having lost the passport补充原因),( he must be very anxious补充心理感受), but I have no idea how to return it to him.
So I need your help. I wish you could post a notice on your newspaper to tell him about the missing passport(so that he can get it back补充结果).(I would appreciate it if you could do me the favor补充交际语). I’m looking forward to your reply.
1. I’m LiHua,____________. (补充同位语)
答案1：chairman of the Student Union
答案2：an exchange student from China
2. I’m writing to ask you to help me find the owner of a passport,_______________. (补充具体来源等)
答案1：who comes from England
答案2：Whose name is Steven ,an English man ,32 years old.
3 With caution, I opened the plastic bag, _______.(补充结果)
答案1：finding that an ID card was in it.
答案1：only to find that the vase was broken.
4 Last week, I bought an English dictionary from your online bookstore _____________(补充目的/原因)
答案1：in order to improve my English .
答案2：with the purpose of enlarge my vocabulary.
I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration.
Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends.
I’m Li Hua.I am writing to ask for your help .
Please read through the materials attached and correct my mistakes in terms of words and format?
I am looking forward to your reply.