学会这个补充细节的方法，写作再也不要“挤牙膏”啦

How to add reasonable details to your article?

假定你是李华。上周日在地铁站捡到了英国人Steven 的护照。请你用英语给你市某英文报社编辑写一封信，内容包括：

I’m LiHua.I’m writing to tell you a piece of urgent information.

Last Sunday, I picked up a passport  in the subway station.The owner of it is Steven who comes from England. I don’t know how to return it to him.  So I need your help. I wish you could post a notice on your newspaper to tell him about the missing passport.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

I’m LiHua, (a high school student in our city(增加同位语，其解释说明的作用)). I’m writing to tell you a piece of urgent information.

I picked up a passport last Sunday in the subway station (when I was taking a ride home. There was nobody around when I found it on a waiting bench. 补充具体细节信息)The owner of it is Steven who comes from England.(Having lost the passport补充原因),( he must be very anxious补充心理感受), but I have no idea how to return it to him.

So I need your help. I wish you could post a notice on your newspaper to tell him about the missing passport(so that he can get it back补充结果).(I would appreciate it if you could do me the favor补充交际语). I’m looking forward to your reply.

下面我们在结合给句子，段落和文章增加细节具体来操作一番!加深小可爱们对这五大方法的理解!

1. I’m LiHua,____________. (补充同位语)

众所周知，不同的李华有不同的身份，所以你可以根据实际情况来合理补充哦

答案1：chairman of the Student Union

答案2：an exchange student from China

小可爱你的答案______________________

2. I’m writing to ask you to help me find the owner of a passport,_______________. (补充具体来源等)

答案1：who comes from England

答案2：Whose name is Steven ,an English man ,32 years old.

小可爱你的答案_______________________

3 With caution, I opened the plastic bag, _______.(补充结果)

答案1：finding that an ID card was in it.

答案1：only to find that the vase was broken.

小可爱你的答案_______________________

4 Last week, I bought an English dictionary from your online bookstore _____________(补充目的/原因)

答案1：in order to improve my English .

答案2：with the purpose of enlarge my vocabulary.

小可爱你的答案_______________________

5_______________ (若你能考虑我的建议，我将不胜感激(补充交际性语言)).

I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration.

假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写封回信。

Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends.

假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms Jenkins写信，请她修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。

I’m Li Hua.I am writing to ask for your help .

Please read through the materials attached and correct my mistakes in terms of words and format?

I am looking forward to your reply.