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你的一次劳动体验;
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你的收获和感受。
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活动举办的目的; -
活动的开展情况;
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你的收获和感受。
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志愿者活动的目的; -
志愿者活动的内容;
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你的收获和感受。
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征文大赛的目的;
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征文大赛的内容; -
征文大赛的要求。
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写信的目的;
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求助的内容; -
期待得到帮助。
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写信的目的;
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求助的内容; -
期待得到帮助。
- 以上六篇作文有什么相似之处?
- 以上六篇作文有什么不同之处?
- 以上六篇作文对我的启示有哪些?
- 我还可以命制出一套关联的作文吗?
- 下次进行书面写作时,我可以从哪些方面思考?
【拓展拔高】
Passage 1
I’m honored to have your presence here today. As we all know, nothing can be attached more significant to than labour. Today I’m here to deliver my speech, sharing my unforgetable labor experience with you.
Last Saturday, I headed for the farm in the countryside to experience labor deeply. To start with, I made a basket out of fiber strings, which was capable to contain ample fruits. Before setting out to pick fruits, I got some practical suggestions from experienced locals. When picking the fruits, I had to put up with not merely the high temperature but the annoying mosquitoes. But anyhow, what made me really content was the countless fruits in my basket which consisted of my devotion and labor.
During my experience, I was entirely convinced that only in ways of labour and diligence can we live a fabulous life. It has been universally reckoned that labour is the most glorious, which I would like to put more emphasize on. Only with labour can we achieve our targets as well as construct a prosperous country. Thanks for your listening.
Passage 2
Today, our class had an unparalleled chance to attend an interesting and unique fruit and vegetables picking activity on a modern farm where various and abundant fresh organic vegetables and fruits were cultivated, allowing us to experience the joy of picking vegetables in person and learn more about organic vegetables and fruits.
Upon our arrival, we were warmly welcomed by the farmers, who hurriedly took us to a large patch filled with diverse fruits and vegetables. Guided by skilled framers, we soon began our picking with a bucket in our hands. Some picked tomatoes, eggplant, cucumber and the others was assigned to pick apples, pears and strawberries. We stooped down, and inched forward as we were hunting for the biggest, reddest and the freshest fruits and vegetables. After two hours’ hard work, we harvested a lot. What struck me most was that we cooked the vegetables together, which was a huge feast.
Tired as we were,we us enjoyed this rewarding and instructive picking activity, for not only can we have a brief understanding of modern farming, but also we experienced the joy of labor and were inspired to treasure food in our daily life.
思考:
- 最后提供的两篇文章与最初的一篇范文有没有关联性?
- 我能写出这样的作文吗?为什么能?为什么不能?
- 这两篇文章与下面的高考作文有关联吗?
上周末,你和同学参加了一次采摘活动,请你为班级英语角写一篇短文,介绍该次活动,内容包括:
1. 农场情况;2.采摘过程;个人感受
【超越梦想】